The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
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The graph gives information on how many
tourists
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visited a particular
Caribbean
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island
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from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the total
number
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of
tourists
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visiting a
Caribbean
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island
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has an upward trend in that period,
while
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the preference between staying on
cruise
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ships
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and staying on the
island
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is fluctuating in the same period. Looking at the chart more specifically, in 2010, the total
number
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of
tourists
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visiting a
Caribbean
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island
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was approximately one
million
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and that of
people
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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and on the
island
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was about 0.75
million
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and 0.25
million
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respectively. From 2011 to 2013, the total amount of
people
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going to the
Caribbean
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island
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had an upward trend from about 1.25 to 1.5
million
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,
likewise
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that of individuals on
cruise
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ships
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increased from around 0.75
million
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to 1.25
million
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as well. Contrary to these trends, the
number
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of
people
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staying on the
island
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fluctuated between 0.5
million
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to 0.25
million
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. From 2013 to 2015, the
number
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of total
tourists
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soared to around 2.75
million
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continuously,
while
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that of individuals on
cruise
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ships
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remained the same. Similar to the
number
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of total
people
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, that of
people
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staying on the
island
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increased drastically to about 1.25
million
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. In 2016, the
number
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of total
tourists
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remained the same,
whereas
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the
number
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of
people
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staying on the
island
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at 1.5
million
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overtook that of
people
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staying on
cruise
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ships
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at 1.25
million
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, caribbean, island, number, cruise, ships, million, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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