The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The graph gives information on how many
tourists
visited a particular Use synonyms
Caribbean
Use synonyms
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the total Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
visiting a Use synonyms
Caribbean
Use synonyms
island
has an upward trend in that period, Use synonyms
while
the preference between staying on Linking Words
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
and staying on the Use synonyms
island
is fluctuating in the same period.
Looking at the chart more specifically, in 2010, the total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
visiting a Use synonyms
Caribbean
Use synonyms
island
was approximately one Use synonyms
million
and that of Use synonyms
people
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
and on the Use synonyms
island
was about 0.75 Use synonyms
million
and 0.25 Use synonyms
million
respectively.
From 2011 to 2013, the total amount of Use synonyms
people
going to the Use synonyms
Caribbean
Use synonyms
island
had an upward trend from about 1.25 to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
, Use synonyms
likewise
that of individuals on Linking Words
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
increased from around 0.75 Use synonyms
million
to 1.25 Use synonyms
million
as well. Contrary to these trends, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
staying on the Use synonyms
island
fluctuated between 0.5 Use synonyms
million
to 0.25 Use synonyms
million
.
From 2013 to 2015, the Use synonyms
number
of total Use synonyms
tourists
soared to around 2.75 Use synonyms
million
continuously, Use synonyms
while
that of individuals on Linking Words
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
remained the same. Similar to the Use synonyms
number
of total Use synonyms
people
, that of Use synonyms
people
staying on the Use synonyms
island
increased drastically to about 1.25 Use synonyms
million
.
In 2016, the Use synonyms
number
of total Use synonyms
tourists
remained the same, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
staying on the Use synonyms
island
at 1.5 Use synonyms
million
overtook that of Use synonyms
people
staying on Use synonyms
cruise
Use synonyms
ships
at 1.25 Use synonyms
million
.Use synonyms
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