The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017
The graph gives information on how many
tourists
visited a particular Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it is clear that
the total number
of tourists
visiting a Caribbean
island
has an upward trend in that period, while
the preference between staying on cruise
ships
and staying on the island
is fluctuating in the same period.
Looking at the chart more specifically, in 2010, the total number
of tourists
visiting a Caribbean
island
was approximately one million
and that of people
staying on cruise
ships
and on the island
was about 0.75 million
and 0.25 million
respectively.
From 2011 to 2013, the total amount of people
going to the Caribbean
island
had an upward trend from about 1.25 to 1.5 million
, likewise
that of individuals on cruise
ships
increased from around 0.75 million
to 1.25 million
as well. Contrary to these trends, the number
of people
staying on the island
fluctuated between 0.5 million
to 0.25 million
.
From 2013 to 2015, the number
of total tourists
soared to around 2.75 million
continuously, while
that of individuals on cruise
ships
remained the same. Similar to the number
of total people
, that of people
staying on the island
increased drastically to about 1.25 million
.
In 2016, the number
of total tourists
remained the same, whereas
the number
of people
staying on the island
at 1.5 million
overtook that of people
staying on cruise
ships
at 1.25 million
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