Some people believe that it is a good idea that older people continue to work if it is possible for them to do. Do you agree or disagree?
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are of the opinion that elderly individuals should continue to be in Add an article
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service
so far they
have the ability. I strongly agree with Correct word choice
as they
this
as it will provide them continuous
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opportunities
of
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in
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society and reduce Correct article usage
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risk
of depression. I will explain Correct article usage
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this
further
with good examples and give a logical conclusion.
Senior citizens should be allowed to keep their jobs if they are capable because rendering one or two services bring about social interaction. While
rendering a service
an aged individual communicate
and there is Correct subject-verb agreement
communicates
a
feedback, some clients met during Correct article usage
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this
process tends to like them and they can from there become friends. For example
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service
, hence
, rendering service
is beneficial.
Moreover
, being in service
lower risk
of depression among aged citizens. Elders are prone to depression Correct article usage
the risk
due to
the process of aging
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ageing
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of decline
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the decline
a decline
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beings
medical
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man who is always involved in Add a hyphen
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a lecturing
thus
, being active is important.
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elderly
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the elderly
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happenings
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rate
of depressed citizens will reduce.Correct article usage
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