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A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you say whether this book would be likely to influence other people Write at least 150 words.

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Hello Sir/Madam, I am writing to you in response to the article called ' The
book
 that influenced me most'. As you asked for volunteers, I am going to take advantage of it and would like to share about an inspirational
book
. So, I read a
book
 named 'Ramayan' written by bhagya shree, when I was in school.
This
book
 is about good deeds and explained their impact on society.  I got inspired by it as it encouraged me from the time I was a student. I learned about the climax of every work
that is
 done with positive intentions and that god always has plans for us, which we realise later in life. 
Moreover
, children aged 6-17 can learn a lot from it because it inculcates values and positivity, and start having faith in karma.  It will
also
 encourage students to work hard without thinking of the future. I hope you like my contribution to your article.  Yours faithfully, Jaskirat
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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