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In Future, the entire news broadcasting will be onlion and there will be no printed newspapers. Do you agree or disagree.

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In the
future
, all the
news
 will be provided online. I would like to give my viewpoint on
this
 article. Publishing newspapers needs a large number of papers, which
people
 after buying and reading on
time
then
, through away as litter. Using a large number of papers for printed sheets needs to cut down a wide variety of trees, causing irreparable damage to the environment. In the
future
, nations will need to protect their natural resources in order to slow down the trend of global warming, helping them live better.
Therefore
, being online the printed newspaper will lead to protecting a vast number of trees, and I agree with that idea.
Also
, as entire
news
 broadcasting shows at certain times,
people
 of different ages could join their peers and watch them, especially for sports
broadcast
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broadcasts
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, in public places like café, or at home.
This
 practice not only helps individuals communicate with each other and enjoy it as a hobby but
also
 has positive effects on their mental health. In the
future
, most
people
 will have little free
time
 and they can not gather with their friends to watch entire
news
 broadcasts at a specific
time
.
In addition
, the technology will be developed and different work will carry out by getting online and a broad array of
people
 have easy and instant access to several facilities online.
As a result
, the next generation will use online
news
due to
time
 limitations, and they will miss
this
 type of social gathering which contribute to their health. So, I disagree with being an online of entire
news
broadcasting
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. In conclusion, regarding generating online
news
 broadcasting in the
future
, I do not agree with
this
due to
 the fact that
people
 lost their hubby communication,
Although
 I highly agree with no printed newspaper in the following period because of saving our environment and natural resources.
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