In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In coming years, it is believed that most

vehicles

would not require to be driven manually and only people

traveling

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using

this

means of transport would be

prresent

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present

in them. I believe the benefits of

this

technology outweigh its drawbacks as it would promote comfort and decrease environmental pollution.

To begin

, the world these days is rapidly advancing, recently there have been reports of manufacturing various types of

vehicles

that can move without the help of humans.

This

new development will bring about

increase

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comfort and promote multitasking as the machines would drive themselves

while

the passengers carry out other activities

such

as work or a quick nap.

In other words

, these activities would not be possible if there are no

self operating

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cars.

Furthermore

, it would make a great impact

in

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the mobility of those that are immobile or disabled.To illustrate

this

is the new Tesla car produced in recent times that does not require a driver.

Additionally

,

self driven

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vehicles

would be a great improvement to

the

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society as they do not need to burn fossil fuel to operate, rather they rely on electricity and

other source

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of energy.

As a result

, there would be a remarkable decrease in the levels of air pollution and

also

reduce the discomfort to people during periods of fuel scarcity.

For example

, in

Nigeria

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there have been reports of petrol scarcity that

has

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resulted in people

have

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to join long queues and buy fuel at

high

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cost.

Hence

,

this

technology would greatly improve

quality

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of life. In conclusion, the years ahead would come with advanced

vehicles

that can drive

itself

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.

This

development would be beneficial as it contributes to reducing the global warming effect caused by

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emmison

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emission

of harmful gases and make life more comfortable.