At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.

There is an increase in the population of most

countries

these days. In most

countries

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The percentage of

youth

outnumber

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that of old

people

.

Although

there are downsides,

this

essay argues that the advantages are stronger as the

youth

constitutes a large number of the

countries

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country's

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workforce and

also

the

youth

being

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more

technology

oriented.

Firstly

, one benefit Is the

youth

makes up a greater part of a

countries

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country's

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workforce. Young

people

are more energetic compared to older

people

.

This

makes them able to work more and produce more and better quality

resource

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compared to the old.

For example

, most employers these days prefer to work with young

people

old

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and old

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people

because they believe young

people

, in terms of physical

appearance

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are

more fit

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and more active,

any

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in any

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kind of labour. It is

also

believed that the

youth

is

also

mentally

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active than the old.

This

makes the

youth

a great asset to many

countries

.

Secondly

, looking at the rates at which

technology

is

taken

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over the world in all aspects, the

youth

are able to merge and

coperate

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operate

corporate

cooperate

faster and easier compared to old

people

. Most old

people

find it difficult

adapting

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to the use of new

technology

.

This

gives they use

an

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upper hand and benefits a country more. New software

are

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introduced in organizations for better work outcome.

They

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youth

is able to learn faster and incorporate it into

the

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daily living. Old

people

tend to be slow learners.

On the other hand

, old

people

also

play important roles in the country.

In

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the community or home level, old

people

help to

instill

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, good morals and discipline in the

youth

. Old

people

also

help in switching to

use

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the customs and traditions of their community and country as a whole. The absence of old

people

live young adults, ignorant of their cultures and beliefs.

To sum up

,I believe the usefulness of the

youth

been

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a larger part of a country’s population trumps the downsides as the

youth

plays a better

roles

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in terms of a

countries

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workforce and the

youth

being

technology

oriented.