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Nowadays, we are producing more and more waste? What are causes of this? What can be done to help reduce the amount of waste we produce?

#waste #amount
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Yes, I would agree with the fact that we are producing more and more
waste
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.
Waste
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 can be in many forms like garbage
waste
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,
plastic
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waste
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 etc.
This
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waste
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 harms our beautiful
environment
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 and destroys nature's beauty.
Waste
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 can be caused by increasing industrialization, excess
waste
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 is dumped into rivers, lakes or left alone. As humans, we are
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 at fault as we do not care about the
environment
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 and continue to dump
plastic
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 or garbage.
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, I personally have seen people throwing
plastic
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 water bottles out of their
car
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 and
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 destroys nature. We should even bury the dead remains of animals as these cause
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 to increase and
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 is very harmful if left alone. To reduce
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 we can set up recycling bins where one can recycle items
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 preserve
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environment
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. Government should
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 release a code of conduct stating the rules and regulations regarding dumping of
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. Government should impose a ban or penalty of Rs 2,000 if anyone is found guilty. I feel we should produce more eco-friendly items and goods which reduces wastage. Government should impose a ban on or should promote ' No
Plastic
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 '. We should
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 conduct various drives ,
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, drive for collecting
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 along the shore.
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, I would like to say that to make
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 world eco-friendly and to help preserve the
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 we need to start working on these rules and regulations. We should abide by the rules in making the world a better place to live.
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