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KH. Abdul
Wahid
Hasyim
’s Paradigm on
Freedom
of Learning (Merdeka Belajar): A Historical Analysis On 11 February 2022, Nadiem Makarim, the Minister of
Education
and Culture of
Indonesia
launched officially the “Merdeka Belajar” curriculum as an effort in enhancing and preparing students to live in
this
digital society (Tempo, 11 February 2022). On
this
occasion, Makarim
also
introduces the Merdeka Mengajar (
Freedom
of Teaching) platform which teachers can access and utilize by using their smartphones.
This
application offers numerous learning materials to upgrade their knowledge, improve their teaching skills, and share their work. Another purpose of
this
platform is to become user-generated content where all teachers across
Indonesia
can upload and share their experiences on it (YouTube Kemendikbud RI, 11 February 2022). Interestingly, the concept of
Freedom
of Learning, as Makarim said, is inspired by Ki Hadjar Dewantara's philosophy on
education
.
However
, when looking back at Indonesian history, Ki Hajar Dewantara was not the only figure who offered
this
notion. Another influential figure in terms of educational transformation was KH. Abdul
Wahid
Hasyim
, the son of KH.
Hasyim
Asy’ari, the founder of Nahdlatul Ulama and the first Minister of Religious Affairs of
Indonesia
.
For instance
, he changed the point of view of students and teachers that generally regarded objects of
education
to be the subjects of
education
. He
then
tried to implement
this
way of thinking in his father's
Islamic
educational system of
Pesantren
Tebuireng.
Therefore
, Zamakhshari Dhofier in his work Tradisi
Pesantren
Memadu Modernitas Bangsa (2009) states that
Wahid
Hasyim
was a prominent figure who successfully combined the
pesantren
tradition into the nation's modernity vision that was second to none at the time. It can be said that
Wahid
Hasyim
was one of the national figures who promoted
freedom
of learning, particularly in
pesantren
and
madrasah
in
Indonesia
.
Furthermore
, during his reign as the Minister of Religious Affairs of
Indonesia
, he had a big contribution in introducing “secular subjects” to
madrasah
as a significant part of today’s
Islamic
schools in
Indonesia
including
Islamic
junior high school (
Madrasah
Tsanawiyah) and
Islamic
senior high school (
Madrasah
Aliyah) in
Indonesia
.
This
policy, in my opinion, has a pivotal role in establishing
Indonesia
Muslims today that well-known as moderate Muslims that significantly different from other Muslim communities
such
as
This
article discusses
Wahid
Hasyim
’s thoughts on
freedom
of learning and his efforts in implementing his ideas both in
Pesantren
Tebuireng in Jombang East Java and in
madrasah
schools across
Indonesia
.
This
writing is divided into four parts consisting of an introduction, a brief biography of
Wahid
Hasyim
, his ideas on
freedom
of learning, and his efforts in implementing his notions.
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