Many government think that economic progression is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People
have different views about economic progression
is most important for government
whether Add an article
the government
people
think education, health care, infrastructure and so on progression
are same significant as well as
economic development. I believe authorities should focused
Change the verb form
focus
both
of them.
There are a number of reasons why I think government should focus on Change preposition
on both
others
sides. Correct quantifier usage
other
To begin
with, the construction of schools, hospitals, roads etc help the country
turning
into a developing nation because Wrong verb form
turn
people
will get education
, treatment and other facilities and Add an article
an education
then
will work more country
's prosperity. As a result
, people
will not move other
countries for these facilities and the Change preposition
to other
country
will not replace into
the lack of intelligence Change preposition
apply
people
. Another reason is that it will help to improve financial problems. If the country
develops various types of sections, other states will interested in that country
's amenities which will help them to earn an amount of money from those sectors. For example
, India has well education and health care which is why every year 70% of people
come to Indiana from another countries
for study and treatment and these help to boost the economy of India.
Replace the adjective
another country
other countries
However
, economic progression
has a variety of positive sides. First of all, the country
can solve their problems without taking any help from other countries due to
having the
huge of Correct article usage
a
fund
for economic development. Fix the agreement mistake
funds
For instance
, America does no
need any help if they have any crisis. As they have a lot of money , they can easily tackle the problems without international Correct your spelling
not
helps
. What is more, the developing Change the wording
help
bits of help
country
's people
can lead a modern and luxury equipments
for their Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
country
's well-being and individuals enjoy the facilities. For example
, the well economic country
will offer their employees high salaries as well as
will able
to provide contemporary lives which is why that Add a missing verb
be able
country
's persons
can Replace the word
people
fulfill
basic needs.
In conclusion, my opinion is that if Change the spelling
fulfil
administration
improves other types of progress , the Correct article usage
the administration
country
will automatically get the
economic Correct article usage
apply
progression
. So government should focus both
sides.Change preposition
on both
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