Some people think the government should subsidize fruit and vegetables to make healthy food more affordable. Other argue that the government should tax unhealthy food instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays some

people

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believe that in order to increase the affordability of nutritious foodstuff, the authority ought to provide subsidies for fruit and vegetables,

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other

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it is better when unhealthy sustenance is taxed by the

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. In my opinion, taxation of unnutritious

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is the easiest way to direct the population to healthy eating way, but

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cause other problems, so the contribution to organic

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is the only right option for the administration. In the

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few years, most products contain pesticides and insecticides and chemical fertilizers which are correspondingly harmful to our bodies.

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organic produce

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more expensive than that which is grown using modern conventional methods, a great many

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start to buy them to stop filling themselves and their children with toxic chemicals.

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, in some

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two more issues which

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to poor diet - poverty and famine. The inhabitants of

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counties are not able to bear the expense of greens.

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, in countries where is a shortage of

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the price of products is 2 or more times higher,

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result

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residents eat only what they can find.

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, the

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can not help the citizens by donating fruit and vegetables because it is obvious that most

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prefer junk

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instead

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of a natural

meal

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. To clarify, the majority of us have a busy life and do not have time to prepare a meal which is harmless for our health, and

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the reason why we grab something from the supermarket. So the administration should work on new methods of quicker access,

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of focusing only on

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. Another thing, the inhabitants suggest the

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should do is to tax convenience foodstuff and

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idea has 2: good and bad sides. In fact, taxation is really efficient.

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, by avoiding the payment

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tend to consume naturally grown produce.

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, there are

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people

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who can not pay the duty and do not have money for non-modified nourishment.

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, these all will conduct to the hunger of the public.

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, the fruit and vegetables we eat are very important

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us and the

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to subsidize them to make them reasonably priced,

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, there is no need for a fee, if we will watch what we consume.