The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.

The chart below shows the percentage of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
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The bar chart provided highlights the proportion of men, women and children in the UK who consumed the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables in 2002, 2006 and 2010.
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, women accounted for the highest percentages,
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children consumed less fruit and vegetables in all the given years. To be specific, in 2002, a quarter of females ate the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables.
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was followed by 22% of males consuming
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daily, which is 2 times higher than children. Over the following 8 years, all of the figures experienced an increase in 2006 when women still remained the highest figure, reaching a peak at 32%. After that, the three groups dropped slightly to 24%, 27% and 14% respectively, in 2010.
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