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A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced the most' Write a letter to te editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter - describe what this book was about - explain how this book influenced you - say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to contribute my views on an article called 'The
book
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 that influenced the most' of a magazine. I would like to tell you about a
book
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 named "MS Dhoni - The
indian
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Indian
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 wicket-keeper". I read
this
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book
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 twice, and I like the story of
this
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book
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.
This
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book
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 is about
the
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 cool man, who is
wicket-keeper
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the wicket-keeper
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 of the Indian team and How he becomes
a
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the
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 captain of
Indian
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the Indian
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 Team.
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, it
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 covers the struggle of him, and how they take decisions in harsh situations. I like
nature
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the nature
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 of MS Dhoni because he takes all decisions from his heart, not from
mind
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his mind
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.
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 kind of nature I admired a lot.
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, he always talks with
others
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 players without becoming angry, which I like to do in my life. Based on my experience, I am likely to say
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book
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is influence
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to
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apply
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other people
most
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the most
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. They can learn something from it and
able
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 to follow it. Thank you for giving me a chance to describe one of my favourite books. I hope people may buy it and see themselves as a new man. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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