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Undoubtedly, it is an essential part of our life to use social media in order to communicate with people.
While
 doing a project on
the
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what social
networks
 are used by
teenagers
 in Zetland for communication, I have found some relevant data in a pie chart that I am going to comment on.
According to
 the pie chart, the majority of the surveyed chose Instagram(33%) as the most preferable social
network
 for communication among adolescents.
On the contrary
, the least popular social
network
 is
twitter
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, not more than a third of
teenagers
 use it(3%). It is
also
 worth mentioning that social
network
 as
snapchat
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(32%) is a bit less than Instagram, the difference between them is only 1%. It is not
surprisingly
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due to
 their convenience in
using
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. Another important thing to mention is that social
network
 as
facebook
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(5%) is slightly six times less than
tiktok
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TikTok
(27%). It seems that
teenagers
 like communicating and sharing videos at the same time. One problem that can arise is that people can get addicted to social
networks
 and it can cause
the
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bad consequences. The best way to tackle
this
 problem is
planning
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 your time with
benefit
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 before using
the
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social
networks
. In conclusion, I would say that social
networks
 are important for modern
teenagers
: they help to communicate with people or study, keep in touch with parents, etc.
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