Some people believe that precessional such doctors and engineers should work in the country they acquired their training. Others say they must be allowed to work in any country they wish to. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views on the issue of professionals
such
as doctors and engineers and the country they should struggle in after the academy. Linking Words
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the majority argue that experts should work in the area where they were educated, I think that they should have the freedom to move and struggle in any place of their choice.
On one hand, there are numerous vital reasons why most individuals suggest that scholars should stay back in the state where they got their training and work there. Linking Words
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, when these citizens relocate to other places it might result in brain drain, meaning the knowledgeable, experienced and skilled personnel move out of nations causing the state to lose most of these folks. Linking Words
This
could be very heartbreaking because scholars whom the host government believe would graduate and effort in the country to enhance productivity and nation-building will leave suddenly and develop another area which did not contribute to their knowledge. For ,instance the authorities in Ghana have implemented a free institution policy Linking Words
however
most graduates travel abroad immediately after completing university without serving the nation that invested in them.
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On the other hand
, I argue that it is more valuable if these experts are allowed to go anywhere they wish to task. I am saying Linking Words
this
because even if the host government had invested resources in them, they are not objects Linking Words
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that
which
the authorities could order around, they have their own life and should be encouraged to make their own decisions. It is the responsibility of every leader to ensure that their citizens are educated, so officials can not use the fact that scholars acquired their training in that location so it is a must for them to task there. Correct pronoun usage
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Furthermore
, when skilled personnel struggle at home they Linking Words
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little income as compared to working overseas, so Wrong verb form
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this
causes them to seek greener pastures where they could get them. For, example Ghanaian nurses are migrating to the US and the UK very frequently because of better salaries which help to improve their standard of living.
In ,conclusion where postgraduates should work after university is debatable. Linking Words
Whereas
the majority of the population suggests that it is reasonable for doctors and engineers to endeavour in the place where they gained their experience, I think it is their right to task in any place they wish to.Linking Words
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that your introduction clearly outlines the topic and presents a thesis statement. Your conclusion should summarize the main points and restate your opinion.
Task Achievement
Make sure to address both views fully in your introduction and provide a clear opinion. Ensure that your essay supports your opinion with relevant examples and explanations.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.