You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly. propose that you meet your friend to talk about it. Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Shreyas, Hope you are well, Currently, I am preparing the

English

language for my IELTS exam and I do not speak

English

fluently. In

this

letter, I explained everything. I have been working in an MNC company for the

last

6 years and my designation is an electrical engineer. Here, my company offered me a job offer in the United States,

this

is a very rare offer, they selected me for

this

because of my work ability so I really need

this

Additionally

, they said, I need to complete the IELTS exam in

English

language for to migrate. I know you very well because you studied

English

literature and

also

you speak

English

very well so I think you are the right person to teach me

this

subject. Kindly assist me in clearing

this

examination. I will arrange a meet-up next Monday. I am eagerly waiting for you to meet. Lovely, John Paul

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider dividing the letter into paragraphs to enhance clarity. For example, separate the explanation, the request for suggestions, and the proposal into distinct sections.

Task Achievement

The letter includes a clear explanation of the reason for learning the language and makes a specific request for help.

Task Achievement

The tone of the letter is warm and suitable for writing to a friend.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately friendly and establish the personal connection well.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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