Most countries want to improve standard of living through economic development,however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
The government wants to save and welfare their community in
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country
. Some of them have Add an article
the country
the
different Correct article usage
apply
way
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ways
standard
of living and the way that government could take Add an article
the standard
is
economic Unnecessary verb
apply
development
. By improving economic Use synonyms
development
, the government in some countries hopes it could make Use synonyms
the
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a
of
living. Change preposition
in
However
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improving economic Correct article usage
apply
development
could have Use synonyms
the
negative effect. Correct article usage
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For instance
, social Linking Words
value
. Here, I will explain the problem Use synonyms
arises
as the effect of Correct pronoun usage
that arises
the
economic Correct article usage
apply
development
.
To start with, Use synonyms
The
economic Correct article usage
apply
development
aims to elevate the standard of living among the communities and has the purpose to improve the quality of living in Use synonyms
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country
. The reason for improving Add an article
the country
standard
of living Add an article
the standard
to
mitigate the poorness in Add a missing verb
is to
community
and to Correct article usage
the community
rise
the money Correct your spelling
raise
value
in Use synonyms
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country
. Add an article
the country
In addition
, the developed Linking Words
economic
in Replace the word
economy
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country
has Add an article
the country
the
positive impact. To illustrate Correct article usage
a
this
, the tourist from other countries has the interest to take Linking Words
vacation
in Add an article
a vacation
developed
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the developed
country
since the developed Use synonyms
country
have the proper accommodation and facility.
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Although
there are Linking Words
much
advantages Change the quantifier
many
from
developing Change preposition
to
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the economic
economic
, Replace the word
economy
on the contrary
, it could have disadvantages which appear as Linking Words
the
economic Correct article usage
apply
development
. Use synonyms
For instance
, social Linking Words
value
. Social Use synonyms
value
is the issue Use synonyms
as
the effect of Change preposition
apply
growing
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a growing
in
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apply
economic
. People with Replace the word
economy
the
greater Correct article usage
apply
economy
condition tend to Replace the word
economic
loss
the respect in community as they think that they are not Replace the word
lose
in
the same level and the norms could be devasted as Change preposition
on
the
result of Correct article usage
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this
improvement.
In conclusion, Economic Linking Words
development
has many Use synonyms
advantage
to make better in a nation and attract the tourist from other countries to visit. Meanwhile, the social Change to a plural noun
advantages
value
problem could appear as Use synonyms
the
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a
development
even though Use synonyms
that is
not a big deal as the developed economy could surpass the disadvantage and increase the Linking Words
money
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monetary
value
.Use synonyms
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