When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centres. Do you agree or disagree?

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No doubt, various facilities are planned by the administration keeping into consideration the effective utilization of leisure time of the dwellers.
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, it is often put forward that
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centres
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and
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should be given more importance than the multiplexes. I completely withstand
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viewpoint and the ideas surrounding my opinion shall be presented in the upcoming segments.
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, the most convincing argument in favour of establishing
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and
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facilities is the general well-being of the masses. Needless to say, a vast majority lead a sedentary lifestyle these days. The culprit behind
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is not just their busy routine but the lack of open areas like
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and gardens where they could spend some time inhaling fresh air, taking a walk or doing some light exercises in order to stay physically and mentally.
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, the encapsulated surrounding and hustle and bustle of shopping
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is not conducive to their holistic health.
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, in most modern cities like Gurugram, and Bangalore; the frequent visit of residents to malls than public
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and playgrounds
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having a detrimental impact on their health. Yet another fact is that shopping
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generally attract the grown-ups who tend to spend their time going shopping, watching a movie in Cineplex, sitting in a bar and other, contrary to it, the
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centres
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and
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attract youngsters and seniors. These age groups find being at malls an expensive affair.
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, spending an hour at a gaming parlour easily costs around Rs. 1000 in my country which only the affluent can afford,
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old people do not find anything of interest at these establishments. Understandably, to enjoy recreational activities, the availability of public facilities like gardens and
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grounds is more desirable than shopping complexes.
To conclude
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, I would like to rewrite,
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with changing times city planners have started to give priority to shopping
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for recreation yet these must not replace the open and public places that are indispensable to the general well-being of the masses.
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