You have recently moved to a different house, and you want to give the news to an English-speaking friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit
My Dear Sara,
Hey Sara! It’s been a long time since we saw each other , I’m just writing
this
epistle to let you know that last
week I moved to a new place.
Let me start by telling you why I decided to move to a new house
,first,
the time between my workplace and my old house
is 40 minutes , additionally
, the live contract of the old house
is almost over.
Moving to the heart of the matter, the new house
an incredible, and the way of decorating the house
amused me a lot. Additionally
, there are some more rooms such
as a laundry room , driver room , cinema, and gym.
However
, undoubtedly, you should visit me as soon as you can. Not only you,
but if you would you can bring your family with you because there are two rooms for guests. Even more, two bathrooms and a small kitchen.
I really hope to get a speedy acceptance from you.
Keep in touch!
Best Regards,
RaheelRemove the comma
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General writing improvement
To enhance your writing, consider varying sentence structure and using more complex grammatical constructions to convey your ideas more effectively.
Grammar and spelling
Ensure to proofread your letter for minor typographical errors and to maintain consistency in tense for a smoother narrative flow.
Personal touch
For an even stronger connection with your reader, consider adding more personal touches or anecdotes related to the reasons for moving or your feelings about the new house.
Task achievement
You effectively communicated the main purpose of your letter, explained your reasons for moving, described the new house, and extended an invitation to your friend, demonstrating a good task response.
Coherence and cohesion
Your letter follows a logical structure, starting with the reason for moving, describing the new house, and ending with an invitation, which enhances its coherence and cohesion.
Tone
The friendly and inviting tone of your letter is suitable for the context of writing to a friend, making your message both welcoming and engaging.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite