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Some say that now we can see films on our phones and tablets there is no need to go to the cinema other says to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema. What is your opinion?

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In recent years, some
people
 believe that we only need our technical devices
such
 as smartphones or tablets to enjoy watching
movies
. Others argue that we need to go to a movie theatre to enjoy
films
. I agree with the latter and in
this
 essay, I will elaborate on specific culprits.
To begin
 with, multi-sound effects operate in cinemas so far.
That is
 to say, even though we are surrounded by a high-technological era, there is nothing like high-quality sound effects than theatres. Americans,
for example
, still go to the cinema regularly
although
 they have other devices that can access to watch
movies
 at home. It is because they are still willing to experience lively sound from movie theatres.
Moreover
,
people
 can enjoy 3D and 4D
films
 in cinemas. It means that there is no alternative
that is
 replaced by other tech tools
such
 as smartphones, PCs, and tablets. In Korea,
for instance
, the 4D movie industries are well-known as one of the lucrative businesses. When it comes to the opponent's view, they might reckon that watching
movies
 using handy devices is much cheaper than going to the cinema. It can be true somewhat degree. On account of expensive ticket prices,
people
 usually think of cost-effectiveness.
However
, the main factor why
people
 like to enjoy
movies
 is to
fulfill
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 vicarious satisfaction and imagination which hardly encounter in their real life as much as entertaining themselves.
Thus
, the cost of one ticket is worth enough. In conclusion, I strongly believe that watching
films
 in cinemas has more benefits than using phones and other tools. Because
people
 can fully enjoy multi-sound effects and cutting-edge technology
such
 as 3D and 4D
films
.
Although
 the tickets could be expensive, it is valuable enough.
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