Nowadays, many medical research projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried by private companies, individuals orgovernment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

These days, many
medical related
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investigations are sponsored by private
organization
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.Some people opined that the
research
should be conducted by individuals, private companies or governments.
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my view,the
government
should handle medical
research
project
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projects
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.
This
essay will explain my position in detail. There are two major reasons why medical
research
project
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projects
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should be carried out by the
government
.
Firstly
, adequate resources
is
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made easily available by the
government
.Medical
research
is a means of providing
solution
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solutions
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to the
society
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medical challenge.
This
project
can be funded with the taxes paid by the people with ease.
In addition
,the
government
have the authority to deploy
required
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the required
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qualified
personnels
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personnel
and
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
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to the field in other to achieve a positive outcome.
For example
, during the outbreak of COVID-19 infection, the
government
of affected countries were able to provide adequate resources to investigate
on
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the cause and treatment of the infection.
Secondly
,if the
government
handle medical
research
project
,bias will be greatly reduced.Medical
research
is not a
profit centered
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project
,it is based on the interest of the community.In other to
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distortion
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of
result
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results
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,
right
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multidisciplinary approach will be established by the
government
.
This
is to ensure that the
research
is carried out
under
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a
well controlled
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environment.
This
approach is unlikely to be established if the
research
is conducted by individuals or private companies because of their
self interest
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of
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in
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making
profit
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from the
project
. In conclusion,it is the view of some people that individuals, private companies or governments should be allowed to handle medical
research
.I believe that the
government
is in the best position to carry out
this
project
.
This
is because adequate resources will be provided;
also
,
distorted
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the distorted
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result
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results
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will be controlled through
introduction
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the introduction
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of
multidisciplinary
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approach by the
government
.
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