Nowadays, many medical research projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried by private companies, individuals orgovernment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
These days, many
medical related
investigations are sponsored by private Add a hyphen
medical-related
organization
.Some people opined that the Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
research
should be conducted by individuals, private companies or governments.From
my view,the Change preposition
In
government
should handle medical research
project
.Fix the agreement mistake
projects
This
essay will explain my position in detail.
There are two major reasons why medical research
project
should be carried out by the Fix the agreement mistake
projects
government
.Firstly
, adequate resources is
made easily available by the Change the verb form
are
government
.Medical research
is a means of providing solution
to theFix the agreement mistake
solutions
society
medical challenge.Change noun form
society's
This
project
can be funded with the taxes paid by the people with ease.In addition
,the government
have the authority to deploy required
qualified Correct article usage
the required
personnels
andCorrect your spelling
personnel
equipments
to the field in other to achieve a positive outcome.Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
For example
, during the outbreak of COVID-19 infection, the government
of affected countries were able to provide adequate resources to investigate on
the cause and treatment of the infection.
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apply
Secondly
,if the government
handle medical research
project
,bias will be greatly reduced.Medical research
is not a profit centered
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profit-centered
project
,it is based on the interest of the community.In other to reduced
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reduce
distortion
of Correct article usage
the distortion
result
, Fix the agreement mistake
results
right
multidisciplinary approach will be established by the Correct article usage
the right
government
.This
is to ensure that the research
is carried out under
a Change preposition
in
well controlled
environment.Add a hyphen
well-controlled
This
approach is unlikely to be established if the research
is conducted by individuals or private companies because of their self interest
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self-interest
of
making Change preposition
in
profit
from the Add an article
a profit
project
.
In conclusion,it is the view of some people that individuals, private companies or governments should be allowed to handle medical research
.I believe that the government
is in the best position to carry out this
project
.This
is because adequate resources will be provided;also
, distorted
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the distorted
result
will be controlled through Fix the agreement mistake
results
introduction
of Add an article
the introduction
multidisciplinary
approach by the Correct article usage
a multidisciplinary
government
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite