Nowadays, many medical research projects are funded by private companies. In your opinion, do you think that research should be carried by private companies, individuals orgovernment? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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investigations are sponsored by private

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.Some people opined that the

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should be conducted by individuals, private companies or governments.

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my view,the

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should handle medical

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essay will explain my position in detail. There are two major reasons why medical

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should be carried out by the

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, adequate resources

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made easily available by the

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.Medical

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is a means of providing

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to the

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medical challenge.

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can be funded with the taxes paid by the people with ease.

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,the

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have the authority to deploy

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qualified

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personnel

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to the field in other to achieve a positive outcome.

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, during the outbreak of COVID-19 infection, the

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of affected countries were able to provide adequate resources to investigate

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the cause and treatment of the infection.

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,if the

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handle medical

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,bias will be greatly reduced.Medical

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is not a

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,it is based on the interest of the community.In other to

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multidisciplinary approach will be established by the

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.

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is to ensure that the

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is carried out

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environment.

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approach is unlikely to be established if the

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is conducted by individuals or private companies because of their

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making

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from the

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. In conclusion,it is the view of some people that individuals, private companies or governments should be allowed to handle medical

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.I believe that the

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is in the best position to carry out

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is because adequate resources will be provided;

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will be controlled through

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approach by the

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