The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the working sectors
over
6 countries in 1995 and 2005.
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Overall
, there had been a surge in employment rates from 1995 to 2005, for both males and females. Linking Words
However
, in 2005, more men were being hired compared to women in all countries.
In the year 1995, there were generally less than 50% female workers, except for Switzerland and the UK. Only around 25% of females were making an income in Australia and New Zealand. In the year 2005, the rate of employment of women increased by at least 10%, reaching heights of close to 70% in Switzerland. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the most dramatic rise took place in New Zealand, which achieved more than 40%.
The average rate of employment of males in 1995 is approximately 60%, Linking Words
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was lower than those of females in Switzerland, Correct pronoun usage
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. In 2005, there had been a major rise in the percentage of Correct article usage
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working class
men, soaring up to more than 80% in Iceland, which was the highest compared to other countries.Add a hyphen
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