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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask ,and allow them do whatever they want. Is this way good to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

#parents #children #consequences #style
Purchasing of different items being demanded
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, and again having the young folks behave the way they ought to ,has
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encouraged their guidances, though, is not an acceptable means of
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 children.
This
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such
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,
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, uncultured and lots more in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
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 the teens through
this
 way will expose them to uncontentmental living because they will always request
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more without prioritizing their needs.
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, the parents may have
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 their necessary
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 and might not live satisfied life because of stress and worry in order
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 for
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 younglings .For instance,a man slumped at his office and died instantly,in order to make both ends meet for his youngsters .
Consequently
, over- pampering style of parenting has numerous negative impacts
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 spoilt youth as its result.
However
, most of
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 are uncultured, disrespectful and indiscipline individuals because their mentors took heed to all their want. ln addition, these spoilt children
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 up to be
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 in my community.and irresponsible . Evidently , they fail to bid by elderly instruction unless either the ones they prefer or advise by their peer pressure .
A research
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 made by Dr Abu of Prison Correctional Centre Lagos stated that half of released
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confused
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 that their cases were over
dependance
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dependence
 and lackadaisical attitude which were calculated in them at childhood
due to
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lassies
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 - faire behaviour of their
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. In conclusion ,
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after effects
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 of raising children which led to poor life exposure as they will not feel independent and be good citizens
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgent
  • entitlement
  • discipline
  • responsibility
  • nurturing
  • self-reliance
  • adversity
  • autonomy
  • validation
  • dependence
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