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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everyhing they want onilne without paying. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Some individuals think that reading
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 will be outdated and people will not read them at all in the
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 because digital platforms can provide the alternative
news
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 website for free. In my opinion, I totally agree with
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 statement because the
quality
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 will be worse or cannot maintain the content and citizens do not spend an additional cost for something they can get without paying.
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 world, since it is quite tough to keep generating
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quality
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of
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the
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contents
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, the
quality
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 will be low or cannot keep publishing. Since the cost of publishing a
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paper
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 is extremely higher than maintaining
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 website, it is difficult to manage the
comnapy
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company
 and the
quality
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 of
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 with
limited
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a limited
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 budget
comparing
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 with
online
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 website.
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, obviously
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 of publishing
enterprizes
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enterprises
 have been shrinking in my country. The
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 that
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news papers
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 and magazines are
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 stopped publishing because the sales plunged and they could not keep the editors and their qualities
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have been observed.
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, the
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paper
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 cannot satisfy readers in the
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.
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, consumers
are tend
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 to consume
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contents
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 without any burdens from
financial
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 perspective as much as possible. Everyone
wants
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 to opt
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 does not need to pay any costs if the
quality
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 of
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the contents
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contents
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are
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 same.
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, I have never bought a
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 in my life because I can read an article regarding sports online
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 media any time,
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paper
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 with payment.
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, it is quite tough to maintain
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the qualitiy
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qualitiy
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quality
 of
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 or the publishing company itself and readers do not spend
additional
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the additional
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cost
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costs
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 to obtain
same
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quality
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 of information.
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, I believe that no one will not consume the
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paper
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 in the
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