You are planning a holiday and want to find out about the kinds of holiday packages that can be arranged by a local company. Write a letter to the company to as for information about the holiday packages they offer. In your letter: say where and when you would like to go include details about the kind of holiday you would like to take say what kind of information you would like to receive.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to request more information relating to my needs. I am planning an overseas vacation. I would like to know more about the different unique deals available in your services. We are thinking of visiting Japan. Especially cities like Tokyo and Osaka in upcoming April. We heard they have Sakura festival and it is famous for amazing trees and flowers. I am looking for family trip packages.

Additionally

, my son who is a toddler will be travelling with us.

Hence

itinerary should not be too hectic. We would love to visit Disney land and we are keen on travelling on Bullet Train. It would be great if could include tourist sports popular for ancient temples.

Lastly

, we would love to explore local cuisines so make sure to include them.

Moreover

, kindly provide us with a list of packages relating to the above itinerary. Please let us know if it can be customized

according to

our requirements. Please

also

mention if there are any discounts if we are flexible with the dates. At

last

, do provide us with information about visa processing fees and documentation required for Indian citizens. I hope to hear from you soon. Please do not hesitate to contact us directly via phone if you need more details. Yours Faithfully, Mr. Ajith Kumar

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