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Nowadays youth is less polite ND respectful as compared to past time what is the reason ND solutions

#youth #time #reason
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A generation ago, a
lot
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 of people's behaviours have changed.
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, a huge number of individuals feel upset about these changes as they claim that teenagers these days are disrespectful and less decent to others.
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 essay will look at the core reasons for
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 and propose some solid solutions. One of the main causes of
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 problem is that young people spend most of their
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 in front of their phones scrolling through social networks and receiving a
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 of ideas that may
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 them negatively. By
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 I mean, that they may are exposed to indecent inflammatory content.
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, content that motivates them to beat elder people. The solution lies in controlling and limiting the content that
children
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 can access. Another problem is that teenagers used to spend a
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 of
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 by themself or with their friends.
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 to say, their friends could be still immature and encourage their peers to act unproperly. To tackle
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 issue, parents should become close to their
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 and spend plenty of
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 with them talking, doing different activities that occupy the
children
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 and educating them as well to behave dutifully.
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, nowadays youth is become less polite and decent to the elder compared to the past ,
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 the reasons
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 as social network applications, and immature partners.
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 is a serious problem, I believe if families were able to spend a
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 of quality
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 with their
children
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 and have control over what they are exposed to, the situation would be greatly improved.
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