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The internet has become profoundly efficient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn. Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, the majority of
people
 prefer to use the
Internet
 as a source of knowledge.
Although
, a few decades before all the
people
 used
books
 for the same aim. It is agreed that there are several reasons for
such
 changes.
For instance
, it is much easier to find information on the
Internet
 rather than in
books
,
also
 I would like to mention that the
Internet
 is much more accessible. First and foremost, the
Internet
 is better because you can find whatever you want in seconds. The only thing you should do is to type it on the search engine. But when you search for something in
books
,
firstly
 you need to find a suitable topic, and after the information that you wanted to know. It requires a big amount of time.
Secondly
, the
Internet
 is free. That means you should not pay any money for the information. But in most cases
books
 are expensive and you need to buy them. I mean that you will need to pay so much money for each book. And you do not need to leave your home in order to search for something on the
Internet
, unlike book lovers. As an example, now I take my SAT lessons from YouTube , which is free, useful and accessible for me at any time of the day. And those videos have thousands of viewers,
therefore
 lots of
people
 get ready for their exams in
this
 way.
To sum up
, the
Internet
 is much more useful and affordable than
books
. In my opinion,
for
this
 reason, lots of
people
 prefer to replace their
books
 with the
Internet
.
Also
, I think in a few years the
Internet
 will completely replace
books
.
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