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some people choose to eat no meat or fish . they believe that this is not only better for thier own health but also benefits the world as a whole. discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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Few individuals prefer to remain vegetarian . They don't like to eat any kind of non-vegetarian
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 as in their
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 its preserves nature and keeps the ecosystem alive.
This
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 essay will discuss the view and present my
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 on the statement.
To begin
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 with, vegetarianism as a
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 choice promotes greenery and agricultural production in the world . It has several benefits like reducing air pollution , and soil erosion .
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,Vegetarian
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 has other benefits like It cannot be stopped
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 severe weather . It only tackles the problem of hunger of the human population in non-violent ways.
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, Countries like India where a large section of society is vegetarian have been able to achieve the goal of achieving two times
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 for poor and needy sections of society by promoting the green revolution in the early seventies.
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, Another section of society feels that non-vegetarian
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 can balance the growing need for
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 for the rising population worldwide. In their
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 killing animals for
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 is justifiable.
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, They argue that in order to achieve
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 security non-vegetarian
food
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 can only help us. To cite an example, Countries like the US has a strong demand for beef,pork, chicken , and lamb kind of products which is not so good for the human heart and promotes the risk of heart attacks among non-vegetarians.
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, Vegetarian
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 is not only beneficial for the environment but
also
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 for human beings' health. Its benefits are enormous .
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, I am of the
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 that vegetarian
food
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 is better for our own health
as well as
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 for the entire world.
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