The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies in 15 years.

The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies in 15 years.
The line graph compares three
companies
in terms of their
waste
output
between the years 2000 and 2015.
It is clear that
there were significant changes in the amounts of
waste
produced by all
threecompanies
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three companies
the companies
shown on the graph.
While
companies
A and
B
saw
waste
output
fall over the 15-year period, the amount of
waste
produced by
company
C
increased considerably. In 2000,
company
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Company
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A produced 12
tonnes
of
waste
,
while
companies
B
and
C
produced around 8
tonnes
and 4
tonnes
of
waste
material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the
waste
output
of
companies
B
and
C
rose by around 2
tonnes
, but the figure for
company
A fell by approximately 1 tonne. From 2005 to 2015,
company
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Company
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A cut
waste
production by roughly 3
tonnes
, and
company
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Company
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B
reduced its
waste
by around 7
tonnes
. By contrast,
company
C
saw an increase in
waste
production of approximately 4
tonnes
over the same 10-year period. By 2015,
company
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Company
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C
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C's
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waste
output
had risen to 10
tonnes
,
while
the respective amounts of
waste
from
companies
A and
B
had dropped to 8
tonnes
and only 3
tonnes
.
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