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The plans below shows the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year

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On showed schemes we can see the actual position of the Southwest Airport and the future planned renovation of it.
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, the introduced plans have some differences between what the building is now and what it will be in the next years. Changes,
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 as an increased number of gates and new comfortable sky trains to get there, added cafes, an ATM, a rental car zone, a baggage drop place and shops will renovate the look of the airport's territory.
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 the present plan, the construction has lack details and consists of standard locations.
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, the customs control in both the departure and the arrival areas, the security and the passport checking sections, the check-in room and the cafe opposite to it. Passengers can get to any of the 8 gates by the walkway.
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, as for the prospective redevelopment of the airport, an extension of the waiting area will be characterised.
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, replanning of the inside space of the building will be expected. To illustrate
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, the future plan shows how the waiting location will be prolongated and divided into 2 wings on the north of the structure. The walking track will be replaced by the modern sky train, so travellers will be arriving right at the new 18 gates on it. Another renovation will be waiting for visitors in the departure zone, because of replacing the cafe and the check-in room and adding the bag drop territory. An empty now the arrival zone, will refilling with another cafe, a cash machine and a car hire place. The most attractive new territory will be the shop located on the way from the passport control and the security zones to the waiting rooms.
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