discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using social networking applications.

No doubt , nowadays everyone loves to use social media to earn money and popularity in
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world .
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for
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very
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to ignore the
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demerits
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will
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explain
the pros and cons of using
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in their daily routine To commence with
benefits
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of using social sites
that
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people
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chance
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to make their name and fame at
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level .Needless to say ,
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these days
individuals mostly share their talent videos like dance , cooking and so on ,on the internet .So that , they can show the art with numerous
people
at once time and earn huge
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of money and name together as well.
Furthermore
, in
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current time period, famous
people
select their actors on these
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videos
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for their movies and advertisement purposes .
Therefore
,
people
can make images in
this
world very
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with the help of social applications. Despite these merits ,there are ample drawbacks
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this
motion
such
as
people
becoming addicted and staying away
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from
their
parents
at the same time .First and foremost ,
people
can easy hacker
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account
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and transfer their data and money from one bank to another within
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second by just having little bit
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about the bank .
As a result
,
people
can become bank debts.
Moreover
, when adults become addicted towards their mobile applications , they start ignoring their
parents
and skip their
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as well .
Hence
, their family bond becomes weak and they face many health problems orderly in
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days .
To conclude
,
although
using social media is
better
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way to get a chance to show their talent in
this
world ,
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the negative aspects are more as they become addicted and stay away from their
parents
which is not good for their relationship in future.
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