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You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city Write a letter of application to the tourism office In the letter give your reasons for wanting the job explain why

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am excited to be writing
this
 letter to express my enthusiasm for a weekend guide job vacancy advertised by the tourism office. As a long-time resident of the city, I am really motivated to share the rich heritage and culture of our city with all the visitors. I believe I am well suited for
this
 job
due to
 my excellent communication skills, apart from English I can
also
 interact in French and a bit of Spanish, which I feel will be an added advantage as we get tourists from whole across the world. My previous experience as a history teacher at our local primary school will surely come in handy as well. I have previously organised history tours for school children as part of their curriculum. I am pretty sure my enthusiasm for our city, combined with my professional skills and previous experience will surely make me a valued member of your team. I eagerly look up to a positive reply from your end. Yours faithfully, Abhilash
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complete response
In your letter, it would be beneficial to include more specific details about the responsibilities tied to the job. For instance, you could mention specific places or landmarks that you wish to guide visitors to, which would demonstrate your in-depth knowledge of the city and add completeness to your response.
logical structure
While your letter is well-organized, you could enhance the logical flow between paragraphs by using more transitional phrases. This will make the connection between your paragraphs smoother and improve the overall cohesion.
greeting and closing
Your greeting and closing are appropriate and align well with the formal tone of the letter.
suitable writing tone
You have maintained a suitable and formal writing tone throughout the letter, which is commendable for an application.
single idea per paragraph
Your paragraphs focus on single ideas which is excellent for clarity and coherence.
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