You recently booked a part-time course in a college, you now need to cancel your booking Write a letter to the college administrator, in your letter Say which part-time course you booked Explain why you need to cancel your booking Ask about booking a different course

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Dear Sir, I write in respect to my recent booking of a part-time course under the department of hardware engineering in your institution which is scheduled to start by the next academic section in June 2023. I regret to inform you that I wish to cancel

this

booking. I work in the hardware section of Fintech Engineering Solutions, and the decision to take the course was to improve my skills to better execute my job. But there has been a recent development in the office.

Due to

the expansion in our business and clientele base, I have been transferred out of the department, which has altered my need. I wish to now book a course in soft engineering

instead

, as it suits my immediate need having been moved to the software department. Kindly furnish me with the requirements to complete the process. I look forward to your usual quick response Yours Faithfully Elisha Emmanuel

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Part-time course
Cancellation
Booking
Administrator
Financial situation
Work commitments
Health issues
Inconvenience
Transfer
Subject area
Schedule
Format
Cancellation policy
Refund process
Assistance
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Due to low- cost airlines, many more people can travel abroad than ever before. do the advantages that tourists bring to the countries they visit outweigh the disadvantages?

Some think that students must travel to another country in order to learn its language and customs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?