Some people believe arts like painting and music donot directly improve people's life, so governments should spend more on other things: Do you agree or disagree?
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，governments cannot spend too much on artwork since society has more important fundamental construction that should focus on. To illustrate, medical healthy is always a trouble for citizens. Today, ageing countries lead to hospital shots of wards, doctors and nurses, and even worse some medicines. Linking Words
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