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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To do you agree or disagree with this statement.

#people #choices
In
this
 contemporary epoch,
due to
 advanced technology and social media, individuals have many
choices
 in every field
such
 as business, education and agriculture department.In my opinion, I totally agree with
this
 notion, which I shall discuss in the upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, owning to several reasons that emphasise, why I favour
choices
. Primarily, people get easy success in their careers. To elaborate more, many people have enough money to start any type of business in the initial stage and they have
choices
 to set up a local or online market. Afterwards, they can invest in the online website or in the stock market where individuals have a higher chance to earn large amounts of money per month from the past.
Furthermore
, adults of Indian farmers have land to cultivate but far from
this
, they set up a dairy farming system.
this
 system, youngsters earn money on a daily basis.
Therefore
, in each sector or any age group people have many
choices
 to build their careers.
In addition
 to
this
, there are some aspects that determine, every person or students have numerous ways to make their life goal. To a greater extent reason is that education has different varieties of a subject that shows the path toward a goal
such
 as a medical study student becoming a doctor, arts have scope in social jobs like police officers, judge and lawyer so on.
However
, students
also
 have
choices
 to study in class as old traditional methods via they want to do an online class or website .
As a result
, it leads to many positive effects
while
 it
also
 shows varieties of options.
To conclude
, it is clear from the above discussion there are abundant merits of
choices
 in every field
whereas
,
choices
also
 help to make a better life in a faster world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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