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Some people believe that the best way to learn English is to study with native teachers. What do you think about this opinion?

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In the contemporary world knowledge of
English
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the English
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 language is the most important skill for education, work,
achievement
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and achievement
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 of purpose.
Learning
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In learning
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 a foreign language the main part is the choice of a teacher, and discipline, the
further
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 result depends on these two criteria. Now many people think that it is better to master a language with a native
speaker
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. I think
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. I do not agree with
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 opinion. Because I believe that it does not always depend on the type of teacher, local or native
speaker
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. I believe that you can start learning English with a local teacher. when you reach a certain level, you can continue learning with a native
speaker
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, there are no native speakers in the school, and the children begin to study with local teachers. and in the future there are students who have achieved excellent results in passing international exams without native speakers.
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, in my understanding of classes with a native
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, of course, there are better sides, but there is no urgent need for
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. I consider the most important discipline and responsibility of the student himself.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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