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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and tv crime dramas? Give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays, society has become aware of different
crimes
 more than ever. And with the increase in
crimes
, novels and TV dramas based on them have gained popularity in many parts of the world. In the following paragraphs, we will delve into the reasons for
this
 change, and I will share my opinion
at the end
. People prefer the crime genre to read and watch because it is interesting and entertaining. To illustrate, it is always fun to take
hint
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 from clues left behind and try to solve a murder mystery
along with
 the main character. It helps the producers to make money when a nail-biting story
catch
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catches
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 the attention of viewers
instead
 of making the same concept love story.
For instance
, reports suggest that the TV show Money Heist broke
the
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records of all viewership, and
due to
 high demand, it was dubbed into fifteen languages.
Furthermore
, these shows try to depict what happens in
real
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the real
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 world and nobody wants to watch or read stories about Cinderella when there are
crimes
 and corruption around them.
Hence
, it compels makers to create more shows that revolve around crime.
However
, there are
majority
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the majority
a majority
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 of unemployed people, who take inspiration from these stories and commit
crimes
 that
causes
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 chaos and anarchy in the world.
Also
, these kinds of movies infiltrate fear in many teenagers especially those who have never seen the dark side of society yet.
To conclude
, I believe that crime-based books and TV shows are entertaining
as well as
shows
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show
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 the social issues going around the globe which are being neglected by the governing authorities. But there should be some control over what can be released as most of the time it is inappropriate for the young generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • intriguing plot
  • suspense
  • immersive experience
  • well-developed characters
  • crime-solving techniques
  • legal procedures
  • psychological thrill
  • unraveling mysteries
  • societal issues
  • high-quality production values
  • well-crafted storyline
  • strong performances
  • engaging narrative
  • relatable dilemmas
  • thought-provoking content
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