Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done solve this problem?

The latest study shows that most of
lawbreakers
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do criminal acts after leaving prison. The cases of
this
appear to be focused on two areas and a number of solutions
also
appear to be possible. Perhaps the major factor here is unemployment and financial problems. It means that
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criminals can not find
job
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after getting free. So, they would not have income.
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, they turn to criminal acts because of poverty. Another cause might be
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isolation.
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, culprits are ostracized from society even when they have passed their sentences
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because people cannot trust them and ignore to communicate with them. So,
this
pressure could make sinners angry and depressed and push them to repeat their
crime
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crimes
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.
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, no one trusts a thief after
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to be his colleague
consequently
, he would start
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stealing to earn money. Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be that
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could prevent
from
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offence occurrence by educating people to be aware
result
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of committing crime.
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, teachers could
announce
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students about
aftermath
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the aftermath
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of doing
felony
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a felony
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and
it’s
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its
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impacts on their
live
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in the future. A second remedy might be that prisoners could be trained to take practical skills in order to find
job
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easier after
releasing
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.
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, if captives
learnt
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carpentry or solder, they would have
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to start their own business. In conclusion, the
factor
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of idleness, poverty and rejection pressure seem to be the main causes. The coordinated responses could be educating prisoners
practical
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skills and making
aware
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them aware
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of
crime
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consequences
for
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of
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this
matter.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recidivism
  • Rehabilitation
  • Reintegration
  • Marginalization
  • Vocational training
  • Psychological counseling
  • Sentencing laws
  • Community-based programs
  • Anti-discrimination laws
  • Employment bias
  • Probation system
  • Social stigma
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