You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter •Say where / when you went on holiday •Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday •Tell them what you would like them to do You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Manager, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a trip we have had that was organised by your company. “Explorer” is the name of that tour, in four days and three nights, which started

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Monday. The first thing was the bus came late on the second day without any notice. My family were informed the day before that the bus will show up and pick us up at 7:30am but

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we wait until 7:50am. A family with two childs has to get up early for the preparation. We hurried for fear that we could be late.

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, we were informed by the staff member who we made the booking that all the places we visit were include in the cost.

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, when we arrived at the Park, the staff at Aquarium section informed that there were additional fees at entrance. We are requesting a refund of the fees we have been extra charge on that trip - the receipt in file attached below and we hope your company should plan more carefully about schedule. Yours faithfully, Mai Huong

yeshomeclassWed May 17 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

183 words

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