Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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of the courses in schools, many take the view that it is inappropriate. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.
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religion
differentiates what is good or bad in society and it would be easier to teach it during childhood so that Use synonyms
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will grow up with proper morality. Use synonyms
Due to
the strict guidelines of Linking Words
religion
, the chances of committing wrongdoings in Use synonyms
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thus
they will undoubtedly become valuable members of society. Linking Words
For example
, researchers found that youngsters raised by religious families are more successful than those of free-thinker families. Linking Words
Furthermore
, Linking Words
religion
helps an individual’s sense of security and belief system; teaching them in school provides moral support to those who are in need of faith.
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On the other hand
, freedom of Linking Words
religion
is a basic human right and nobody should be forced to learn about the belief system. To elaborate, the setting of Use synonyms
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religion
and teaching is unethical and a violation of rights for minority groups. Use synonyms
In addition
, we should value coexistence and respect others’ cultural heritage regardless of their background. Linking Words
Moreover
, some religious beliefs are too extreme in ideology Linking Words
thus
leading to propaganda which is not suitable for Linking Words
children
to learn at school. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, rather than giving lectures on Linking Words
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religion
, schools should teach basic Use synonyms
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such
as morality, sympathy, empathy, the benefits of helping others and proper manners so that our future generation will grow up as responsible adults.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
both arguments have their own merits, I believe that Linking Words
religion
is a sensitive topic and Use synonyms
children
should learn it with the arrangements by parents Use synonyms
instead
of teaching it as a subject at school. Given Linking Words
this
situation, it is recommended that Linking Words
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should go to their respective religious schools to learn the Use synonyms
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