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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problem, as well practical problems.

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Nowadays, more and more people go to other countries for studying, working and travelling. Whether it will
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problems
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 or not attracted numerous controversies and drew the attention of the public. In my eyes, I strongly reckon it will be a problem.
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, it has been argued why I think speaking a foreign
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Although
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 possibly positive aspects of speaking a foreign
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 must be taken into account, I still believe it has in many ways led to social
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, one well-known American scientist, Rob White said"Foreign
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 can easily make a misunderstanding.
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, it results in the cultural shock."
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 reminds me of my international party where I was alone all the time. It is
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 clearly shown that speaking a foreign
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 social
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, another factor
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 be considered is practical reasons. As far as society is concerned, the ultimate aim of society is to make people's lives easier.
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, one recent article published in Nelson Magazine revealed that when you bargain in a foreign
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, it is more likely that you will not win.
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, if you go to the bank to do some stuff, you will probably miss some important information because it is harder to get details when you listen to a foreign
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, there is no doubt that speaking a foreign
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 practical
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, I hold the view that speaking a foreign
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 can
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 the reasons outlined above. In order to address
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 issue, the government and people should make a concerted effort to find
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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