Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Many novel medicinal and product safety experiments have been carried out by using

animals

as subjects.

While

I strongly uphold the same idea as advocates who believe these practices should be prohibited owning to their contradiction with our moral principles, they are perceived by many as a sacrifice for the greater good. On the one hand, a considerable portion of the public believes that these experiments are essential for the countless lives of people that can be saved. A drug obtained through these procedures,

for instance

, will be safe for human use and greatly help the lives of many.

Although

this

view is understandable, it has major flaws,

such

as the need for consideration that there are many humans deemed by the public to be more deserving to have those tested .

Conversely

, a great number of people including me stand against it and believe

such

practices should be banned on account of the fact that

animals

also

have feelings as humans and should be treated as

such

. In the past, it’s been proven by numerous scientific investigations that

animals

have the capacity to feel a variety of emotions.

Therefore

, empathy towards

animals

has greatly increased, leading to many people standing up against the big pharmacy companies, and deterring them from carrying out any more of those practices that are considered by society as animal cruelty.

Overall

, I believe that being cruel towards

animals

with the justification of it being beneficial to humanity is completely unacceptable

due to

the fact that they

are

Change the verb form

are also sentineled

are also sentineling

show examples

also

sentinel beings like us and should be given the same rights.

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Prediction or recommendation

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In a nutshell
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Morality
Vivisection
In vivo testing
Cruelty-free
Animal welfare
Biomedical research
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