People nowadays tends to have children at older age. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there are tendencies that people will have their own
child
when they get old. Although
giving birth
in old age
might come with several problems, it helps the parents
to have money to cater to their children
's education, and basic needs and to be psychologically ready for it which I believe outweighs the disadvantages as the childbirth complications
can be treated with adequate medical intervention, however
, lack of preparedness can lead to mental illness of both
parents
.
To start, late childbirth comes with some issues which are detrimental to the mother's health. Complications
like Ectopic pregnancies, miscarriages (early pregnancy loss) congenital disorders, high blood pressure, and chromosomal condition in the child
such
as Down syndrome. For instance
, one of the Federal medical health care centres in Nigeria; reflected in a recently published report that; 70% of women who got pregnant at the age
of 35 years has ectopic pregnancy and preeclampsia. However
, complications
that come with giving birth
in old age
now have solutions. A scientist has found a way of preventing medical problems with the use of certain medications.
In addition
, one of the very important advantages of having a child
late is mental preparedness and financial stability which helps both
parents
to be able to cater for their basic needs after birth
. when both
parents
are mentally prepared, they tend to have peace of mind and also
cater for themselves, forming intimacy together. For example
, in a survey conducted by World Health Organization(WHO), it was published that women that gave birth
late in Nigeria are more responsible and care for their children
more than others. Afterwards, women that gave birth
at an early age
abandon their children
due to
insufficient income and lack of mental preparedness which affect their children
's education and mental well-being . Therefore
, waiting till old age
before having a child
is better.
In summary, despite the several complications
that follow giving birth
at an advanced age
, the merits outweigh its demerits as both
couples would be more prepared mentally and financially.Submitted by oludayotemilade on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
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- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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