The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
The diagram given illustrates the different stages of development of the honey bee during its life cycle.
From an
overall
perspective, it is evident that there are five primary stages shown in the process, from egg to mature insect. Linking Words
In addition
, the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 Linking Words
days
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The life period of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg, and it lays one or two eggs every three Use synonyms
days
. Between 9 and 10 Use synonyms
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later, each hatch, and the immature insect, or nymph, appears.
During the third stage of the process, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times. Use synonyms
This
moulting first takes place 5 Linking Words
days
after the egg hatches, Use synonyms
then
7 Linking Words
days
later, and again another 9 Use synonyms
days
later. After a total of 30 to 31 Use synonyms
days
from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the next 4 Use synonyms
days
, it reaches full maturity.Use synonyms
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