The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
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The diagram given illustrates the different stages of development of the honey bee during its life cycle. From an
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perspective, it is evident that there are five primary stages shown in the process, from egg to mature insect.
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, the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36
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. The life period of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg, and it lays one or two eggs every three
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. Between 9 and 10
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later, each hatch, and the immature insect, or nymph, appears. During the third stage of the process, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times.
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moulting first takes place 5
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after the egg hatches,
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7
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later, and again another 9
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later. After a total of 30 to 31
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from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the next 4
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, it reaches full maturity.
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