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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025. The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025. The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.
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The chart depicts the exports by
Southland
 in international
tourism
,
dairy
products
 and
meat
products
 in
two
 years (2000 and 2023) with projections for 2025. The units are measured in
billion
pounds
.
Overall
, in the
two
 years that have been observed, international
tourism
,
as well as
 the
dairy
 sector,
as well as
 the
dairy
 sector have seen a boom
while
Southland
 has decreased its sale abroad of
meat
products
.
Moreover
,
dairy
products
 were traded to foreign countries more than the other
two
 sectors in the current
year
. In the future,
Southland
 expects to market international
tourism
 more than the other
two
 sectors. In terms of international
tourism
 and
dairy
,
Southland
 increased its earnings by approximately 1
billion
pounds
 (from about 8 to 9
billion
pounds
) and 3
billion
pounds
 (from 7 to 10
billion
pounds
) respectively in the current
year
, as compared to 2000.
In contrast
, its sale of
meat
products
 dipped by half a
billion
 (from 6 to 5.5
billion
pounds
) in the current
year
.
However
, in 2025,
Southland
 is expecting to decrease its exports in both
dairy
 and
meat
 by 500 million
pounds
 (i.e. earning only 9.5
billion
 and 5
billion
 respectively) each.
Whereas
, they hope to increase the value of international
tourism
 to the tune of 10
billion
pounds
, i.e. an increase of 1
billion
 from the current
year
.
Submitted by Leena Kapoor on

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