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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025. The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025. The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.
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The chart depicts the exports by
Southland
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 in international
tourism
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,
dairy
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products
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 and
meat
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products
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 in
two
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 years (2000 and 2023) with projections for 2025. The units are measured in
billion
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pounds
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.
Overall
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, in the
two
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 years that have been observed, international
tourism
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,
as well as
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 the
dairy
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 sector,
as well as
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 the
dairy
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 sector have seen a boom
while
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Southland
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 has decreased its sale abroad of
meat
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products
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.
Moreover
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,
dairy
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products
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 were traded to foreign countries more than the other
two
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 sectors in the current
year
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. In the future,
Southland
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 expects to market international
tourism
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 more than the other
two
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 sectors. In terms of international
tourism
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 and
dairy
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,
Southland
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 increased its earnings by approximately 1
billion
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pounds
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 (from about 8 to 9
billion
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pounds
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) and 3
billion
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pounds
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 (from 7 to 10
billion
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pounds
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) respectively in the current
year
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, as compared to 2000.
In contrast
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, its sale of
meat
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products
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 dipped by half a
billion
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 (from 6 to 5.5
billion
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pounds
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) in the current
year
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.
However
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, in 2025,
Southland
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 is expecting to decrease its exports in both
dairy
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 and
meat
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 by 500 million
pounds
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 (i.e. earning only 9.5
billion
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 and 5
billion
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 respectively) each.
Whereas
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, they hope to increase the value of international
tourism
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 to the tune of 10
billion
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pounds
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, i.e. an increase of 1
billion
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 from the current
year
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words southland, tourism, dairy, products, meat, two, billion, pounds, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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