Some feel that individuals should have the right to strike in all jobs while others feel there are exceptions. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some people argue that striking should be in every type of work
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others don't support it. In
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essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my own opinion. On the one hand, it is not unusual that citizens don't go to their work or organize meetings in central streets for showing their position in a lot of countries.
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, in the USA we can see events against to Government at least once a year. Every worker can do it without permission. By striking not only leaders of that country but
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individuals realize the importance of them in society.
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is the best way when nobody wants to hear their problems connected to their life and job. Developed countries support
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kind of protest.
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, I believe there are some jobs, which are crucial no matter what happened. We cannot imagine our life without them.
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, one of them will be doctors. It is true that they must be patient. Even go-slow can be the reason for someone's death. In my opinion, without striking everybody understands the importance of them.
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, I have never seen one country, which treats bad to its medics. Policemen are
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our helpers in problematic situations. Our safety is in their hands and protests seem unusual and weird in
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situation.
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reason, we should respect their work. In conclusion,
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others say everybody should have opportunities to take strike action, I believe that when people need our help, we can not be selfish.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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