You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Aman,
It's been a
while
, hasn't it? I'm exhilarated to inform you that I'm moving to Canada in
the very next month for my studies and wanted some assistance, from your side, to search for a part-time Change preposition
apply
job
.
Actually, I enrolled in an entrepreneur management course, it's having five days classes
on weekdays. So, I'll be free on weekends.
As far as the necessity of a part-time Change preposition
of classes
job
is concerned, as you know, I'm not financially stable and in order to pay my expenses, I need a job
. Moreover
, I want to get the experience so that in the future I can easily get better opportunities.
Moving further
, I want to know you're recommendations about which job
sector is better for me, on top of that, it would be great if you'll provide me references
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with references
as well as
online sites, where I can apply.
I'll await your response and hope you will give your best effort to help me in this
matter.
Best Regards,
jaspreet
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Jaspreet
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coherence cohesion
To improve the logical structure, ensure that each paragraph flows seamlessly into the next. Use a variety of connecting phrases to show the relationship between ideas.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear separation of ideas by dedicating one paragraph to each main point. This will improve the single idea per paragraph score.
task achievement
For a higher task achievement score, provide more specific details about your study plans, such as the institution you'll be attending or the exact duration of your course.
task achievement
Consider addressing the letter more formally with the friend's last name unless the relationship is very casual. Also, ensure the closing sign-off matches the level of formality throughout the letter.