In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Most manufacturers of vehicles,
such
as
cars
, buses, and trucks, are developing
automation
technology which can lead to driverless.
Although
the technology can help
people
, especially those with a disability, the feature would induce unemployment for drivers and
taxi
companies, which outweighs the advantages. First of all,
vehicle
manufacturers plan to make technology
such
as
automation
of driving with the aim of helping
people
to ease
traveling
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without steering the
vehicle
.
Moreover
, the plans can help the
disability
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to have their own car so they can travel without using public transportation or hiring a private
driver
.
For example
, Mercedes Benz (a German
vehicle
brand) has already made
vehicle
automation
as buses,
cars
, and trucks because they believe it would help
people
and the
company
reduce their expenses.
Also
, it is efficient in managing time since the owner of the vehicles can do other activities
instead
of driving their
cars
.
On the other hand
,
vehicle
automation
is not always a good plan inasmuch as
people
in developing countries rely on
driver
jobs, including
taxi
driver
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.
Therefore
, the planning of
vehicle
automation
could devastate the economy of some developing countries, which generates unemployment for
taxi
driver
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drivers
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.
For instance
, based on articles from an Indonesia newspaper, the bluebird
company
(A
taxi
company
from Indonesia) ordered
automation
car from China in order to reduce the
company
's cost of paying salaries for their drivers, which caused unemployment for
taxi
drivers and In 2018 the
driver
declared a demonstration for the government to ban
automation
car since 10% Indonesian jobs from the
driver
.
To sum up
, the
automation
vehicle
such
as
cars
, trucks, and buses that makes
driver
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to
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be hands-free steering to ease them in
traveling
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does not always have a positive impact on the community because it could cease the jobs for the
driver
.
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  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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