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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Most manufacturers of vehicles,
such
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cars
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, buses, and trucks, are developing
automation
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 technology which can lead to driverless.
Although
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 the technology can help
people
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, especially those with a disability, the feature would induce unemployment for drivers and
taxi
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 companies, which outweighs the advantages. First of all,
vehicle
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 manufacturers plan to make technology
such
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automation
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 of driving with the aim of helping
people
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 to ease
traveling
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travelling
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 without steering the
vehicle
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.
Moreover
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, the plans can help the
disability
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disabled
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 to have their own car so they can travel without using public transportation or hiring a private
driver
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.
For example
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, Mercedes Benz (a German
vehicle
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 brand) has already made
vehicle
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automation
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 as buses,
cars
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, and trucks because they believe it would help
people
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 and the
company
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 reduce their expenses.
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, it is efficient in managing time since the owner of the vehicles can do other activities
instead
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 of driving their
cars
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.
On the other hand
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,
vehicle
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automation
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 is not always a good plan inasmuch as
people
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 in developing countries rely on
driver
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 jobs, including
taxi
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driver
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drivers
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.
Therefore
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, the planning of
vehicle
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automation
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 could devastate the economy of some developing countries, which generates unemployment for
taxi
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driver
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drivers
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For instance
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, based on articles from an Indonesia newspaper, the bluebird
company
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 (A
taxi
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company
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 from Indonesia) ordered
automation
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 car from China in order to reduce the
company
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's cost of paying salaries for their drivers, which caused unemployment for
taxi
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 drivers and In 2018 the
driver
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 declared a demonstration for the government to ban
automation
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 car since 10% Indonesian jobs from the
driver
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.
To sum up
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, the
automation
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vehicle
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such
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cars
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, trucks, and buses that makes
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driver
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the driver
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to
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apply
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be hands-free steering to ease them in
traveling
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travelling
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 does not always have a positive impact on the community because it could cease the jobs for the
driver
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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