There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the mobile phone. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phone.

No doubt, nowadays everything is available on the cell phone ,

however

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the question is that a number of problems are caused by

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device

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like relationships broken ,health

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and so on .

Therefore

, I agree with

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statement that the demerits are more than merits and I will briefly explain it in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with benefits of

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trend that these day people mostly complete their tasks with the help of their gadgets

while

sitting at home

such

as online shopping, they can order fast food , send files from one place to another and do much other work and they can pay payment online as well.Needless to say ,

due to

this

public can save

time

and during that

time

they can finish their other tasks .

For example

, working women usually order food from outside whenever they have less

time

to make food and in between they can easily do other work to save

time

such

as clearing and dusting .Adding more , school-going students can easily download their books in pdf form On their mobile and they can generally do their study anytime without carrying any book with them .

Moreover

,many videos are available on the internet by which they can learn about anything .

Hence

, the smartphone is the best way to enhance knowledge and save

time

. Despite these advantages,there are ample problems which cause by these gadgets like health issues ,social and others.

Firstly

,in the current days , people spend maximum hours on their phones

while

watching Netflix, Hotstar and playing video games ,

as a result

, they forget to give some

time

to their loved ones and at

last

the bond with family members

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becomes weak and

then

they start living separately.

Furthermore

, people avoid face-to-face communication as they send text and voice messages to their friends,by social networking

also

reduces as they just spend

time

on their phones .

Apart from

this

, they faced many problems like eyesight weak, obesity,depression and anxiety because they mostly strike on their screens and are less aware of their surroundings .

Thus

,mobile phones are the main obstacle in the modern generation. In conclusion,

although

smartphone creates multiple issues

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folks like ,

nonetheless

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also

cannot deny and helps to save

time

and energy .

Additionally

,it is the best platform to study any subject.