Smacking children is the best form of the discipline. To what extend do you agree?
Nowadays smacking
children
to bring them up is an effective procedure among today's parents
and their children
's behaviour to live appropriately. I slightly agree that there is no way
to raise children
well apart from using physical punishments. This
essay will argue that controlling children
's behaviour by some punishments.
To begin
with, hitting children
has become an easy way
for parents
to discipline their children
. Some parents
think that the only way
to control their children
is to spank them. Because they think that if they do not smack their children
they may go into bad ways and will surely repeat thus
mistakes. For instance
, if the children
do something wrong to their parents
, they can solve it by smacking them. But it can affect a child's psyche and he can develop bad feelings towards his parents
. But on the other ,hand spanking children
can significantly improve their upbringing.There are many better methods to raise children
than hitting them. Because hitting children
can have a negative impact on their lives and cause them to fall into bad ways. For example
, if parents
hit their children
, this
can have a bad effect on their psyche, which can lead to children
running away from home and joining bad people. Instead
, if the children
are explained in a good way
and told not to repeat this
mistake. I think it is better than smacking them. It is good for children
's future.To sum up
, some parents
may think that their children
should be spanked for upbringing but as I told you there are positive and negative sides to smacking them. In my ,mind pros definitely outweigh the cons.Submitted by ieltsteaching0 on
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