The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.summarisethe information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The given diagram represents the process of producing
milk
and dairy.
Overall
,it involves 8 stages ranging from cow raring to the supply of the finished products to the supermarket for purchase and consumption.
To begin
with,it involves 2 stages of processing. The first in the farm and the second in the factory. Firstly
cows are rare in the farms to the stage of reproduction. Lactating herds are milked daily in the mornings and evenings with the aid of milking
machine. The Add an article
a milking
the milking
collect
Replace the word
collected
milk
are
preserved in the refrigerator for preservation before being transported to the factory with a Change the verb form
is
milk
tanker for onward processing.
I'm the factory, dairy products, cream,butter and cheese are extracted from the milk
and the milk
preserved
by the process of
Pasteurization. The Add a missing verb
is preserved
milk
and products are packaged and send
to the supermarket for Change the form of the verb
sent
sales
to consumers.Fix the agreement mistake
sale
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