The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.summarisethe information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.summarisethe information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The given diagram represents the process of producing
milk
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and dairy.
Overall
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,it involves 8 stages ranging from cow raring to the supply of the finished products to the supermarket for purchase and consumption.
To begin
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with,it involves 2 stages of processing. The first in the farm and the second in the factory.
Firstly
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cows are rare in the farms to the stage of reproduction. Lactating herds are milked daily in the mornings and evenings with the aid of
milking
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a milking
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machine. The
collect
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collected
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milk
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are
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is
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preserved in the refrigerator for preservation before being transported to the factory with a
milk
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tanker for onward processing. I'm the factory, dairy products, cream,butter and cheese are extracted from the
milk
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and the
milk
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preserved
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is preserved
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by the process of Pasteurization. The
milk
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and products are packaged and
send
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sent
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to the supermarket for
sales
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sale
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to consumers.
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